I liked this. The color palette is striking, I wouldn't have chosen it myself, but I think it works. I am a little confused by the choice of red for the I beam in the bottom right, maybe a slightly more muted red would work better so as not to draw so much attention. One thing that I was wondering about was shadows and highlights, the piece feels a little too uniform, but maybe more detailed lighting would take away from the style. Overall, an original entry that stood out, with a few technical things to work on.